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His best friend, red card was looking for him. Somebody was following him. He felt there were someone in back but he was very scared so he ran fast he can and tell parents. but... they were in magic that forgot everything... so they couldn't remember him. Suddenly someone catch him and brings next to yellow card.... HE WAS KIDNAPPED TOO!!!! EOP could find his friends but he was afraid that he might kidnapped too... so ran to his home...
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It's kind of hard understanding your story because of your grammar and the sentences. I think your story is very intresting but try working to fix the sentances for the readers to understand what you're saying
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